I want to talk about protecting the environment because we have to try to protect the environment.
I think that there are three main ways to protect the
environment. The first way is that governments can try to raise awareness of
public in order to protect the environment. They can organize seminars and
develop projects about preserving the environment. Moreover, governments can
print posters, make public advertisements and distribute brochures. In this
way, governments can heighten awareness of public.
The second way is that
people can plant trees. That’s why, trees prevent noise and air pollution in
the environment. For example, a pine tree converts carbon dioxide that 40 people
breathe out within an hour to oxygen in an hour. In other words, the more
people plant trees the more they can safeguard the environment.
The third way
is that people can use renewable energy sources. Burning coal or other fuels
emits greenhouse gases and pollution in the environment. For example, an
average home powered by a coal utility burns 12.000 pounds of coal in a year.
On the other hand, by using renewable energy as the primary power source, the
reduction of pollution per household is equivalent to that of planting 400
trees. To sum up, the environment can be protected by heightening awareness of
public, planting trees and using renewable energy sources.I talked about protecting the environment.I hope that these are useful.
Dear Şeyda;
YanıtlaSilI read your paragraph. I liked it very much. I learned so many things while reading it. I am very happy about it. As to content, you talked about three things that can be done to protect the environment. They are very interesting and useful informations. I hope we can do all of them or at least some of them. If I have to talk about grammatically, I can say that there is no mistake. You did well. Your paragraph very well-organized. You used firstly, secondly, thirdly, for example and in this way. You give numbers to make your proposal more convincing. For a final word, I liked your sharing so much.
Thank you :)
Dear Şeyda;
YanıtlaSilWhile I was reading your paragraph, I liked very much and I enjoyed very much.At the beginning of your paragraph , you mentioned about protecting environment because we have to try to protect the environment.You mentioned three ways to protect it.I learned so many things.I easily comprehend this paragraph.You describe it very well.In this paragraph, you are giving some messages to people and I want to tell you thank you .I totally agree with you.It is a really meaningful paragraph.If I look at grammatically, you do not make any grammer mistakes or wrong spelling. You expressed her clearly and exactly.You used phrases, conjuctions and sentences well organized.You did well.
Dear Şeyda,
YanıtlaSilFirstly, thank you for sharing such useful information with us :) I enjoyed reading it because I noticed that I can do things to protect environment. Your aim was heightening the awareness and I can tell that you did. :) As Selin said, the organization is very well. Your paragraph can easily be understood. I can see no mistakes. You used right conjuctions and phrases. It is a really good and informative paragraph. Thanks again for sharing it with us! :)